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Posted by JohnDoenut on December 5, 2001, at 10:39:06
A Poem by John Doenut
Bad news today
Must take evasive action
Lots going on
Posted by Kristi on December 5, 2001, at 11:53:45
In reply to Psycho Haiku, posted by JohnDoenut on December 5, 2001, at 10:39:06
Hi
I know it's none of my business... but since were anonymous, I'll ask.
what happened? What's the bad news and evasive action . Are you Ok????????> A Poem by John Doenut
>
> Bad news today
> Must take evasive action
> Lots going on
Posted by JohnDoenut on December 5, 2001, at 12:22:28
In reply to Re: Psycho Haiku » JohnDoenut, posted by Kristi on December 5, 2001, at 11:53:45
Ok. You can ask. Im ok, thanks for asking!
My job status is now up in the air.
I have updated my resume and begun sending it out just in case.
I just thought the format of the Haiku in the Psycho Babble forum would be a new, and funny maybe way to express whats going on with people. Psycho Haiku. Anyone else is free to try some. . . :)J
> Hi
> I know it's none of my business... but since were anonymous, I'll ask.
> what happened? What's the bad news and evasive action . Are you Ok????????
>
Posted by Simcha on December 5, 2001, at 12:25:43
In reply to Psycho Haiku, posted by JohnDoenut on December 5, 2001, at 10:39:06
Strange mood in head
Thoughts ripple through soul out of body
I must affirm------ Simcha -----------------
> A Poem by John Doenut
>
> Bad news today
> Must take evasive action
> Lots going on
Posted by Roo on December 5, 2001, at 14:03:51
In reply to Re: Psycho Haiku, posted by Simcha on December 5, 2001, at 12:25:43
> Strange mood in head
> Thoughts ripple through soul out of body
> I must affirm
>
> ------ Simcha -----------------
>
>
>
> > A Poem by John Doenut
> >
> > Bad news today
> > Must take evasive action
> > Lots going onRoo's Haiku:
Sent out email
demanded attention from male crush
haste and regret
Posted by susan C on December 5, 2001, at 14:38:40
In reply to Re: Psycho Haiku, posted by Roo on December 5, 2001, at 14:03:51
What are the insturctions for Haiku?
a mouse scratching her head, forgetting school
Posted by JohnDoenut on December 5, 2001, at 15:01:37
In reply to Re: Psycho Haiku=instructions?, posted by susan C on December 5, 2001, at 14:38:40
> What are the insturctions for Haiku?
I think I/we are only vaguely following any rules.
Have you or anyone seen computer Haiku?
http://dept.physics.upenn.edu/~heiney/jokes/haiku.htmlWindows NT crashed.
I am the Blue Screen of Death.
No one hears your screams.--
A file that big?
It might be very useful.
But now it is gone.--
For formal rules I have found this:
http://www.ahapoetry.com/keirule.htm
In grade school we tried to follow these rules given examples and write our own. Now I just punt! :)Chaos swirls around me
It has no effect
Drug induced stuporOr I could say:
Drug induced stupor
Chaos swirls around me
It has no effectWhy not?! :)
JohnD
Posted by nightlight on December 5, 2001, at 23:23:40
In reply to Re: Psycho Haiku=instructions?, posted by JohnDoenut on December 5, 2001, at 15:01:37
> > What are the insturctions for Haiku?
>
I always just did the loose 17-syllable thing~'A spirit lay be
side me through the night and we
shared intimacies'
nightlight-1972
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