Psycho-Babble Social Thread 25948

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yet another postponed suicide.... AUSTIN

Posted by kid_A on July 1, 2002, at 11:58:05

AUSTIN


Someone is gone
That fat plastic gun
shot through air
empties in your
hands

That Nazi rack
click clack and
you're done
for--- and

What a boy he was
Beat to ground
by air, snuffed
like that

Dearie, darling,
sweetness,
shall we meet? I
dare say not

The breath that
kills me, took you
hand in hand
What a wedding
it must have
been

Oh to kiss
The dead who
plod their ground
foot by foot
restless
and young

Oh,
death,
silly boy,
lecher

You're nothing
without
me.

 

Re: Took my breath away (nm) » kid_A

Posted by Zo on July 1, 2002, at 16:03:41

In reply to yet another postponed suicide.... AUSTIN, posted by kid_A on July 1, 2002, at 11:58:05

 

Re: Took my breath away

Posted by Alii on July 2, 2002, at 2:32:33

In reply to Re: Took my breath away (nm) » kid_A, posted by Zo on July 1, 2002, at 16:03:41

geeze Zo take my line of being left breathless by a whambam into your solar plexus poem like that!

k_A---

You know how I feel about not being able to express myself clearly in this format. so here is what I can tell you: You craft well. Very well. Puhleeese know that many others gasped when reading your words. I did.

--a. woo


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