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Lost

Posted by leo33 on October 5, 2008, at 20:18:56

I want to post my latest poem, I am having a very rough time of it and have been a member here since 1999, so bear with me. I haven't posted in a long while but read the board quite often. I am hanging on by a thread right now. Positive or negative feedback is welcome.

The title of the poem is "Lost"

Lost in this world around me
Lost in the feelings inside me
Lost are the feelings in my soul
Lost without the currency to pay the toll

Lost like a ship in the fog
Lost like an abandoned city dog
Lost and walking alone
Lost like one without a home

Lost and filled with overwhelming fear
Lost and shedding a lonely tear
Lost and extremely confused
Lost and my ego is bruised

Lost in a sea of despair
Lost and in need of repair
Lost and looking for love
Lost and praying for help form above

Lost and looking for hope
Lost and at the end of my rope
Lost and my mind is unsound
Lost and I need to be found

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Re: Lost » leo33

Posted by Jay_Bravest_Face on October 6, 2008, at 2:40:27

In reply to Lost, posted by leo33 on October 5, 2008, at 20:18:56

That is REALLY great Leo! It captures my moodscape
ever since I was dx'd back in the early 90's.

Hope to read more!

Jay :)

Re: Lost

Posted by leo33 on October 6, 2008, at 20:56:27

In reply to Lost, posted by leo33 on October 5, 2008, at 20:18:56

Thanks Jay, I'm glad I am not alone but sorry you feel the way I do. I hope in some weird way my poem can help someone out there.

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