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Posted by happyflower on October 31, 2007, at 21:15:29
Goodluck, I am waiting for my 3rd paper that I handed in late, maybe I will get it tomorrow.
If you need more tips on your next paper, try to connect the paragraphs with a lead in or ending phrase, so they flow together.
My first paper I got 14.5 out of 15 (teacher told me she never gives a perfect score, plus she asked to keep my paper ;-)) Then we had to do a in class writing , talk about pressure. I got 4.5 our of 5, so I am pretty happy about that.
My next paper is about Hans Christian Anderson fairy tales and why they are so morbid and all. Like Little Match Girl, The Red Shoes, Little Mermaid, and Girl Who Trodded on Loaf. I am going to talk about how the real world is just as morbid and that fairy tales gives people ideas on how to overcome problems or to avoid them in the first place. Believe me I know some of those morbid horrors of life, so it should be easiy to write about. lol 6 more weeks to go! Then off to Disney World! I could use Mickey MOuse about right now!
Posted by angela2 on November 6, 2007, at 12:47:57
In reply to Papers, papers,papers, papers, papers, and papers, posted by happyflower on October 31, 2007, at 21:15:29
lol, I like your title.
> Goodluck, I am waiting for my 3rd paper that I handed in late, maybe I will get it tomorrow.
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> If you need more tips on your next paper, try to connect the paragraphs with a lead in or ending phrase, so they flow together.
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> My first paper I got 14.5 out of 15 (teacher told me she never gives a perfect score, plus she asked to keep my paper ;-)) Then we had to do a in class writing , talk about pressure. I got 4.5 our of 5, so I am pretty happy about that.
>congrats. Hope you do well on your other papers.
> My next paper is about Hans Christian Anderson fairy tales and why they are so morbid and all. Like Little Match Girl, The Red Shoes, Little Mermaid, and Girl Who Trodded on Loaf. I am going to talk about how the real world is just as morbid and that fairy tales gives people ideas on how to overcome problems or to avoid them in the first place. Believe me I know some of those morbid horrors of life, so it should be easiy to write about.
wow, That sounds really interesting! what class is it for?
lol 6 more weeks to go! Then off to Disney World! I could use Mickey MOuse about right now!
Disney world? yay! that sounds like the best treat after working so hard. Have fun.
Posted by Gee on November 6, 2007, at 20:14:19
In reply to Papers, papers,papers, papers, papers, and papers, posted by happyflower on October 31, 2007, at 21:15:29
Your papers sound so much more fun than mine!!! How many more do you have to go? I have one a week until Dec. 14th :-( And some of them are HUGE.
One of my other problems seems to be flow... I'm gonna go talk to my prof on Thursday and see if he has any tips for the BIG paper.
Disneyland? Don't let your morbid fairytales destroy Dland!!
Posted by happyflower on November 6, 2007, at 22:52:27
In reply to Re: Papers, papers,papers, papers, papers, and pap » happyflower, posted by Gee on November 6, 2007, at 20:14:19
Yeah! I got another ! 18.5 out of 20!!!
And don't worry studying about fairy tales won't ever take the magic away from Disney World! lol
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